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C3 |
[0040] always winter then always raining
year after year winter and rain
always going in somewhere to get out
of the cold & wet sopping in the old
green coat places you didn't have to
pay to get in like [0053] [0053] sitting at the [0030] never looked back after that [0030] |
that time last [place = supralinear] what time
no time but the one time
[0056] come & gone come & gone [place = infralinear] come & gone
born & died in no born & died
get me born & died in no
time

C4 |
[0047] |
[0001] difference of source and theme
Switches of source and theme
should be enough to distinguish
these shades of the source
xxx xxx xxx xxx to another
source or theme
never xxxxing nor xxxing xx x xxx
and xxx
[0057|001] 5 s [0057] Silence. [0057|002] Ten seconds. [0058] Breath just audible. [0059] After 3 seconds eyes open.
C4 |
[0047] |
[0001] The differentiation of A B C
as shades of the same shd.
be sufficiently conveyed
by diversity of source &
theme. If not it may be
indicated by selective
recording

DIRECTIONS
[0007] All in darkness except the Listener's face
spotlit about 8' above stage level and
midstage off centre.
[0008] Old face & long flowing white hair as if
seen from above spread on a pillows .
[0009] The voices A B C are his own coming
to him from both sides & above (see note)
[0010] They relay one another without any break
in general flow except when pauses & silences
indicated

[0001] Note: [0004] A B C shd. be distinguishable as modes
of the one. If the location & thematic
diversity insufficient to convey
this effect it shd. be sought in
level (xxx) of recording.

xxx
[0006] xxx darkness but for [place = supralinear] old man's listening Listener's face
face about 8' above stage level xxx
spotlit about 8' above stage level. [0008] xx Old face,
long flowing white hair as if [place = supralinear] when seen from above
spread on a pillow. [0009] The [place = supralinear] recorded voices [⁁] [place = margin left] A B & C see note[⁁] he hears are
his own coming to him from right, left &
above both sides and above. [0010] They relay
each other without any break in general
flow except when pauses or silences indicated.
[0012] Silence, 7 seconds. [0013] Listener's eyes are open.
[0004] Note: If voices not sufficiently differentiated
by
[0004] xxx
[0004] If differentiation of voices
[0004] If strange dispersion in space and
[0004] If dif. of voices not sufficiently clear
through dispersion in space and xxx
differences [place = supralinear] xxx xxx xxx of context it should
be underlin underlined [place = supralinear] reinforced by xxx [place = supralinear] quality
of recording
[0004] If A B & C not sufficiently
different
[0004] If spatial & thematic separation
insufficient to di
[0004] If spatial & thematic diversity
triple location & thematic
diversity insufficient to
differentiate the voices they
should be further recording
xxx be should be used to
[0004] x
A B C are modes of the same.
If this fact [place = supralinear] distinction not xxx by [place = inline] xxx [place = supralinear] conveyed by
triple location & thematic
diversity it should be
[0004] If triple location and thematic
diversity no prove insufficient
to convey this distinction it should
be underscored by
[0004] shd. be [place = supralinear] just distinguishable as modes [place = supralinear] modes [place = supralinear] sha [place = supralinear] different shades [place = margin right] of the
xxx xxx xxx same.
xxx xxx xxxion of
If triple location plus thematic
diversity insufficient to convey
this effect it should xx be sought
in differentiation xxx in different
at the recording level diversity
of [place = supralinear] the recording.
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