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L'Innommable Segment 357, version 1 (MS-HRC-SB-3-10, f. 09v)
Mais au fait, cet écran où mon regard se
bute, tout en y voyant de l'air encore,
ce regard n'est ce pas ne serait-ce plus plu pas plutôt
la suture de cet endroit, l'enceinte, d'une densité
de plomb?
L'Innommable Segment 357, version 2 (Minuit 1953, p. 26)
Mais au fait, cet écran où mon regard se bute, tout en persistant à y voir de l'air, ne serait-ce pas plutôt l'enceinte, d'une densité de plombagine ?

The Unnamable Segment 357, version 3 (MS-HRC-SB-5-9-1, f. 12r)
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But may
not this screen which my eyes probe in vain,
and see as denser air, in reality be the
enclosure wall, as compact as plumbago.
solid as lead.

The Unnamable Segment 357, version 4 (MS-HRC-SB-5-10, f. 11r)
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But may not this screen
which my eyes probe in vain, and see as denser air, in reality be the ienclosure wall, as compact solid as plumbago lead?

The Unnamable Segment 357, version 5 (MS-WU-MSS008-3-71, f. 12r)
But may not this screen which my eyes probe in vain, and see as denser air, in reality be the enclosure wall, as compact as lead?
The Unnamable Segment 357, version 6 (Grove Press 1958, p. 16)
But may not this screen which my eyes probe in vain, and see as denser air, in reality be the enclosure wall, as compact as lead?
L'Innommable Segment 357, version 7 (Minuit 1971, p. 23)
Mais au fait, cet écran où mon regard se bute, tout en persistant à y voir de l'air, ne serait-ce pas plutôt l'enceinte, d'une densité de plombagine ?