Synoptic Sentence View: Sentence 654
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L'Innommable Segment 654, version 1 (MS-HRC-SB-3-10, f. 25v)
En effet, un peu plus de franchise de sa part, lui qui garde naturellement l'initiative, et ça irait peut-être mieux, [⁁] [⁁] aussi bien de son point de vue que de celui qu'il me prête,
L'Innommable Segment 654, version 2 (Minuit 1953, p. 52)
Un peu plus de franchise de sa part, lui qui garde naturellement l'initiative, et ça irait peut-être mieux, aussi bien de son point de vue que de celui qu'il me prête.

The Unnamable Segment 654, version 3 (MS-HRC-SB-5-9-1, f. 26r)
A
little more frankness on his part, since the
initiative belongs to him, might help matters
a little somewhat, as well from his point of view as
from that which he attributes to me.

The Unnamable Segment 654, version 4 (MS-HRC-SB-5-10, f. 28r)
A little more frankness on his part,
soince the initiative belongs to him, might be a help, as well
from his point of view as from the one he attributes to me.

The Unnamable Segment 654, version 5 (MS-WU-MSS008-3-71, f. 27r)
A little more explicitness on his part, since the initiative belongs to him, might be a help, as well from his point of view as from the one he attributes to me.
The Unnamable Segment 654, version 6 (Grove Press 1958, p. 34)
A little more explicitness on his part, since the initiative belongs to him, might be a help, as well from his point of view as from the one he attributes to me.
L'Innommable Segment 654, version 7 (Minuit 1971, p. 44)
Un peu plus de franchise de sa part, lui qui garde naturellement l'initiative, et ça irait peut-être mieux, aussi bien de son point de vue que de celui qu'il me prête.