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Footfalls Segment 256, version 1 (MS-UoR-1552-1, f. 05r)
Then
finally, raising her head and fixing
Emily (?) - the daughter's given name,
as the reader will remember - fixing
Emily full in the eye, she said. -
(Pause.) she murmured. Did
you
notice
see notice
anything unusual in church
this evening?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 2 (MS-UoR-1552-2, f. 04r)
But
finally, raising her head and fixing Emily - the
daughter's given name, as the reader will remember -
fixing Emily full in the eye, she said - (pause) -
she murmured - , Emily, did you notice anything
unusual strange
in church this evening?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 3 (MS-UoR-1552-3, f. 04r)
But finally, raising her head and fixing Emily - the
daughter's given name, as the reader will remember -
fixing Emily full in the etye, she said - (pause) -
she murmured, Emily, did you notice anything strange in
church this evening?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 4 (MS-UoR-1552-4, f. 04r)
But finally, raising her head and fixing Emily Amy - the
daughter's given name, as the reader will remember -
fixing Emily Amy full in the etye, she said - (pause) -
she murmured, Emily Amy, did you notice anything ... strange unusual strange in
church this evening at evensong?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 5 (MS-HRC-SB-3-7, f. 06r)
But finally, raising her head and fixing Amy - the daughter's given name, as the reader will remember - fixing Amy full in the eye, she said - (pause) - she murmured, Amy, did you observe anything . . . strange at Evensong?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 6 (MS-UoR-1552-5, f. 04r)
But finally, raising her
head and fixing Amy - the daughter's given name, as
the reader will remember - fixing Amy full in the eye,[₰]
she said - (pause) - she murmured, fixing Amy full in the eye she murmured, Amy, did you observe
anything...strange at Evensong?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 7 (MS-UoR-1552-7, f. 06v)
But finally, raising her head and fixing Amy-the daughter's given name, as the reader will remember-fixing Amy full in the eye she said-(pause)-she murmured, fixing Amy full in the eye she murmured, Amy, did you observe anything . . . strange at Evensong?
Footfalls Segment 256, version 8 (Faber & Faber 1976, p. 12)
[M:] But finally, raising her head and fixing Amy-the daughter's given name, as the reader will remember-fixing Amy full in the eye she said-(pause)-she murmured, fixing Amy full in the eye she murmured, Amy, did you observe anything . . . strange at Evensong?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 9 (MS-BC-1991001-12-11, f. 04r)
But finally, raising her head and fixing Amy - the daughter's given
name, as the reader will remember - [⁁]raising her head and[⁁] fixing Amy full
in the eye she said - (pause) - she murmured, fixing Amy full in the eye she murmured, Amy. (Pause) Amy. (P.) Yes, M. Amy: Yes M. Mrs W: Amy, did you oboserve
anything...strange at Evensong?

Footfalls Segment 256, version 10 (MS-UoR-1552-6, f. 04r)
But finally, raising her head and fixing Amy - the daughter's given name, as the reader will remember - raising her head and fixing Amy full in the eye she said - (pause) - she murmured, fixing Amy full in the eye she murmured, Amy. (Pause. No louder.) Amy. (Pause.) Amy: Yes, Mother. Mrs W: Amy, did you observe anything...strange at Evensong?
Footfalls Segment 256, version 11 (Grove Press 1977, p. 47)
[M:] But finally, raising her head and fixing Amy-the daughter's given name, as the reader will remember-raising her head and fixing Amy full in the eye she said-(pause)-she murmured, fixing Amy full in the eye she murmured, Amy, did you observe anything . . . strange at Evensong?
Footfalls Segment 256, version 12 (Faber & Faber 1977, p. 37)
[M:] But finally, raising her head and fixing Amy-the daughter's given name, as the reader will remember-raising her head and fixing Amy full in the eye she said-(pause)-she murmured, fixing Amy full in the eye she murmured, Amy did you observe anything . . . strange at Evensong?

Pas Segment 256, version 13 (MS-BC-1991001-12-24-1, f. 04r)
Mais finalement elle leva la tête, fixa Amy - niom de
baptême de l'enfant comme le lecteur s'en souviendra -
leva la tête, fixa Amy
en plein dans au fond de la prunelle et dit -
(un temps) - et murmura, fixa Amy
en plein dans au fond de
la prunelle et murmura, Amy. (Un temps.
Pas plus fort.) Amy. (Un temps.)
Amy: Oui, mère. Madame W: Amy, as-tu remarqué quelque
chose...d'étrange aux Vêpres?

Pas Segment 256, version 14 (MS-BC-1991001-12-24-2, f. 04r)
Mais finalement elle leva la tête, fixa Amy - nom de
baptême de l'enfant comme le lecteur s'en souviendra -
leva la tête, fix
ea Amy au fond de la prunelle et dit -
(-un temps) - et murmura, fixa Amy au fond de la prunelle
et murmura, Amy. (Un temps. Pas plus fort.) Amy.
(Un
temps.) Amy: Oui, mère. Madame W: Amy, as-tu remarqué
quelque chose...d'étrange aux Vêpres?

Pas Segment 256, version 15 (MS-BC-1991001-18-11, f. 05r)
Mais
finalement elle leva la tête, fixa Amy - nom de baptême
de l'enfant comme le lecteur s'en souviendra - leva la
tête, fixa Amy au fond de la prunelle et dit - (un temps) -
et murmura, fixa Amy au fond de la prunelle et murmura, Amy. (Un temps. Pas plus fort.) Amy. (Un
temps.) Amy: Oui, mère. Madame W: Amy, as-tu remarqué
quelque chose...d'étrange aux Vêpres?
Pas Segment 256, version 16 (La Nouvelle Revue Française 1977, p. 13)
[M:] Mais finalement elle leva la tête, fixa Amy - nom de baptême de l'enfant comme le lecteur s'en souviendra - leva la tête, fixa Amy au fond de la prunelle et dit - (un temps) - et murmura, fixa Amy au fond de la prunelle et murmura, Amy. (Un temps. Pas plus fort.) Amy. (Un temps.) Amy : Oui, mère. Mme W : Amy, as-tu remarqué quelque chose... d'étrange aux Vêpres?
Pas Segment 256, version 17 (Minuit 1977, p. 16)
[M:] Mais finalement elle leva la tête, fixa Amy - nom de baptême de l'enfant, comme le lecteur s'en souviendra - leva la tête, fixa Amy au fond de la prunelle et dit - (un temps) - et murmura, fixa Amy au fond de la prunelle et murmura, Amy. (Un temps. Pas plus fort.) Amy. (Un temps.) Amy : Oui, mère. Madame W. : Amy, as-tu remarqué quelque chose... d'étrange aux vêpres ?