Synoptic Sentence View: Sentence 22

Not I Segment 22, version 1 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-1, f. 04r)

... but this other awful thought ... even more awful perhaps ... that feeling was coming back ... feeling was coming back! ... beginning at the top ... then working down ... ^{the whole frame ...} but no ... only the face [⁁]^alone ... ^{face & mouth} for the moment ... ah ... for the moment ...

Not I Segment 22, version 2 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-3, f. 03r)

...but this other dready^ful thought...even more dreadful if possible...that feeling was coming back...feeling was coming back!...beginning at the top...then working down...the whole frame...but no...the face alone...for the moment...ha!...for the mo moment...

Not I Segment 22, version 3 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-4, f. 03r)

...but this other awful thought...oh long after...even more awful if possible...that feeling was coming back...feeling was coming back!...beginning at the top...then working down...the whole frame...but no...the face alone...so far...ha!...so far...

Not I Segment 22, version 4 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-5, f. 03r)

..but this other awful thougr^ht..sudden flash..oh long after!..even more awful if possible...^that feeling was coming back..feeling was cp^oming back!..starting at the top..then working down..the whole machine..but no..^{spared that..}the face alone..so far..ha!..so far..

Not I Segment 22, version 5 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-6, f. 03r)

..but this other awful thought..og^h long after!..sudden flash.. evebⁿ more awful if possible..that feeling was coming back^..imagine!....feeling was coming back!..starting at the top..then working down..the whole machine..but no..spared that..the face ^mouth alone..so far..ha!..so far..

Not I Segment 22, version 6 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-7, f. 04r)

..but this other waful awful thought..oh long after..sudden flash..even more awful if possible..that feeling was coming back..imagine!..feeling coming back!..starting at the top..then working down..the whole machine..but no..spared that..the mouth alone..so far..ha!..so far..

Not I Segment 22, version 7 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-8, f. 03r)

...but this other awful thought...oh long after!...sudden flash...even more awful if possible...that feeling was coming back... ...imagine!...feeling coming back!...starting at the top...then working down...the whole machine...but no...spared that...the mp^outh alone...sp^o far...ha!...so far...

Not I Segment 22, loose jotting 8 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-10-synopsis, f. 01r)

Fear that feeling may come back but for the moment mouth

alone

Not I Segment 22, version 9 (MS-HRC-SB-5-4, f. 06r)

... but this other awful thought ... sudden flash ... oh long after! ... even more awful if possible ... that feeling was coming back ... feeling was coming back! ... starting at the top ... then working down ... the whole machine ... but no ... spared that ... the mouth alone ... so far ... ha! ... so far ...

Not I Segment 22, version 10 (MS-HRC-SB-5-3, f. 05r)

... but this other awful thought ^{... oh long after} ... sudden flash ... oh long after! ...^[₰] even more awful if possible ... that feeling was coming back ^{... imagine!} ... feeling was^[₰] coming back! ... starting at the top ... then working down ... the whole machine ... but no ... spared that ... the mouth alone ... so far ... ha! ... so far ...

Not I Segment 22, version 11 (Faber & Faber 1973, p. 11)

[MOUTH:] ... but this other awful thought ... oh long after ... sudden flash ... even more awful if possible ... that feeling was coming back ... imagine! ... feeling coming back! ... starting at the top ... then working down ... the whole machine ... but no ... spared that ... the mouth alone ... so far ... ha! ... so far ...

Pas moi Segment 22, version 12 (MS-UoR-1396-4-25, f. 04r)

mais cette autre idée atroce..^{oh longtemps après..brusque illumination..}encore plus atroce si possible..que la sensation reprenait..rendez-vous compte!..la sensation reprenait!..partan partant du haut..puis gagnant vers le bas..la machine t entière..mais non.. ça au moins..rien que la bouche..jusque-là..ha..jusque-là..

Pas moi Segment 22, version 13 (MS-UoR-1396-4-26, f. 04r)

mais encore une idée...atroce...encore plus atroc oh longtemps après...un éclair...encore plus atroce x si possible...que la sensation revient...imaginez!...la sensation revient!...partant du haut...puis gagnant vers le bas...la machine tout entière...mais non...ça au moins...que la bouche...jusque-là...ha!...jusque-là...

Pas moi Segment 22, version 14 (MS-UoR-1396-4-27, f. 05r)

mais avec cela ^{ça encore} une autre^...autre idée ^{encore une idée...}...atroce ^effrayante...oh bien plus tard ^après...brusque illumination ^{éclair [st.]} ...encore plus atroce ^effrayante si possible...que la sensation revient...imaginez!...la sensation revient!...partant du haut...puis gagnant vers le bas...la machine tout entière...mais non...ça au moins...que la bouche...la face...jusque-là...ha!...jusque-là...

Pas moi Segment 22, loose jotting 15 (MS-BnF-4-COL-344-27, f. 02r)

Idée-illumination 3 (retour de la sensation)

Pas moi Segment 22, version 16 (MS-BnF-4-COL-344-27, f. 06r)

mais avec ça encore une...encore une idée...effrayante...oh bien après...brusque illumination...encore plus effrayante si possible...que la sensation revient...imaginez!...la sensation revient!...partant du haut...puis gagnant vers le bas...la machine tout entière...mais non...au moind^s ça...que la bouche...la face...jusque-là...ha!... jusque-là...

Pas moi Segment 22, version 17 (MS-BnF-4-COL-178-970, f. 04r)

mais avec ça encore une...encore une idée...effrayante...oh bien après...brusque illumination...encore plus effrayante si possible...que la sensation revient...imaginez!.. .la sensation revient!...partant du haut...puis gagnant vers le bas...la machine tout entière...mais non...au moind^s ça...que la bouche...la face...jusque-là...ha!... jusque-là...

Pas moi Segment 22, version 18 (Minuit 12, p. 6)

[BOUCHE:] mais avec ça encore une... encore une idée... effrayante... oh bien après... brusque illumination... encore plus effrayante si possible... que la sensation revient... imaginez !... la sensation revient !... partant du haut... puis gagnant vers le bas... la machine tout entière... mais non... au moins ça... que la bouche... la face... jusque-là... ha !... jusque-là...

Pas moi Segment 22, version 19 (Minuit 1975, p. 16)

[BOUCHE:] mais avec ça encore une... encore une idée... effrayante... oh bien après... brusque illumination... encore plus effrayante si possible... que la sensation revient... imaginez !... la sensation revient !... partant du haut... puis gagnant vers le bas... la machine tout entière... mais non... au moins ça... que la bouche... la face... jusque-là... ha !... jusque-là...