Synoptic Sentence View: Sentence 23

Not I Segment 23, version 1 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-1, f. 04r)

then thinking ... some time later it is true ... it can't go on ... much longer ... mouth on fire ... whole face aching ... trying ^straining to hear ... make something of it ... and the other thoughts ... trying to get on with them ... all that together ... it can't - what? the buzzing? ... yes ... on top of all the buzzing ... so-called! ...

Not I Segment 23, version 2 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-1, f. 05v)

all that
all that ... [⁁]^all at once ... ^{imagine ...} body like gone ... imagine ...

Not I Segment 23, version 3 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-3, f. 03r)

then thinking...long after^{...sudden flash}...it can't go on...much moremout more...mouth on fire...whole face aching ^{all that...flood stream of words...}...straining to hear...make something of it...and her own thoughts...trying to get on with ^{make something of} them...all that together...it can't - ...what?...the buzzing?...yes...on top i^of all the buzzing...so-called! ^[?A]

Not I Segment 23, version 4 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-3, f. 05r)

...al^l that...al^l at once...imagine...body like gone...

Not I Segment 23, version 5 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-4, f. 03r)

then thinking...oh long after...sudden flash...it can't go on...all this...all that...^steady stream of words...straining to hear...make something of it...and her own thoughts...make something of them...all 6 of them - ...all of them...all - ...what?...the buzzing?...yes...on top of all the buzzing...so-called!... ^[A] all that together...imagine!...body like gone...

Not I Segment 23, version 6 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-5, f. 03r)

then thinking..oh long after..sudden after!..sudden flash..it can't go on..all this..all that..steady stream..straining to hear..make something of it..and her own thoughts..make something of them..all - ..what?..the buzzing..yes..q^all the time the buzzing..so-called!..all that together..imagine!..body like gone..

Not I Segment 23, version 7 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-6, f. 03r)

then thinking..oh long after!..sudden flash..it can't go on..all this..all that..steady stream..straining to hear..make something of it..and her own thoughts..make something of them..al^l - ..whar^t? ..the buzzing?..yes..all the time the buzzing ..so-called!..all that together..imagine!..^whole body like gone..

Not I Segment 23, version 8 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-7, f. 04r)

then thinking..oh long after..sudden flash..it can't go on..all this..all that^{..steady stream}..straining to hear..make something of it..and her own thoughts..make something of them..all - ^p ..What?..the buzzing?..yes..all the time the buzzing..so-called..all that together..imagine..whole body like gone..

Not I Segment 23, version 9 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-8, f. 03r)

then thinking^{...oh long after...sudden flash}...it can't go on...all this... all that...steady stream...straining to hear...make something of it...and her own thoughts...make something of them...all-...what?...the buzzing?...yes...all the time the buzzing...so-called!...all that together...imagine!...whole body like gone...

Not I Segment 23, loose jotting 10 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-10-synopsis, f. 01r)

Next thought: such distress can't continue

Not I Segment 23, version 11 (MS-HRC-SB-5-4, f. 06r)

then thinking ... oh long after! ... sudden flash ... it can't go on ... all this ... all that ... steady stream ... straining to hear ... make something of it ... and her own thoughts ... make something of them ... all - ... What? ... the buzzing? ... yes ... all the time the buzzing ... so-called!... all that together ... imagine! ... whole body like gone ...

Not I Segment 23, version 12 (MS-HRC-SB-5-3, f. 05r)

then thinking ... oh long after!^[₰] ... sudden flash ... it can't go on ... all this ... all that ... steady stream ... straining to hear ... make something of it ... and her own thoughts ... make something of them ... all - ... W^what? ... the buzzing? ... yes ... all the time the buzzing ... so-called!^[₰] ... all that together ... imagine! ... whole body like gone ...

Not I Segment 23, version 13 (Faber & Faber 1973, p. 11)

[MOUTH:] then thinking ... oh long after ... sudden flash ... it can't go on ... all this ... all that ... steady stream ... straining to hear ... make something of it ... and her own thoughts ... make something of them ... all - ... what? ... the buzzing? ... yes ... all the time the buzzing ... so-called ... all that together ... imagine! ... whole body like gone ...

Pas moi Segment 23, version 14 (MS-UoR-1396-4-25, f. 04r)

puis se dit..^{encore une..}oh longtemps après..brusque illumination..que ça ne peut continuer..tout ça..tout ceci..ce flot sans arrêt..la xx lutte pour entendre..en tirer quelque chose..et ses propres pensées..quelque chose d'elles..tout ...^- ...quoi?..le bourdon?..oui..tout le temps le bourdon..soi-disant..tout ça ensemble..rendez-vous compte!.. tout le corps comme en allé..

Pas moi Segment 23, version 15 (MS-UoR-1396-4-26, f. 04r)

puis se disant...oh longtemps après...un éclair...cela ne peut pas continuer...tout cela...tout ceci...flot continu...la lutte pour entendre...en tirer quelque chose... et ses propres pensées...en tirer quelque chose...tout ça en - ...quoi?...le bourdon?...oui...tout le temps le bourdon...soi-disant...tout ça ensemble...imaginez!...tout le corps comme en allé...

Pas moi Segment 23, version 16 (MS-UoR-1396-4-27, f. 05r)

puis se disant...oh bien plus tard ^après...brusque illumination ^{éclair [st.]} ...cela ^ça ne peut pas continuer...tout cela ^ça...tout ceci...flot= ceci ^ça...flot continu...la lutte pour suivre ^saisir...en tirer quelque chose...et ses propres pensées...en tirer quelque chose...tout ça en - ...quoi?...le bourdon?...oui [⁁]^oui...tout le temps le bourdon...sois-disant...tout ça ensemble...imaginez!...tout le corps comme en allé...

Pas moi Segment 23, loose jotting 17 (MS-BnF-4-COL-344-27, f. 02r)

Idée-illumination 4 (impossible continuer)

Pas moi Segment 23, version 18 (MS-BnF-4-COL-344-27, f. 06r)

puis se disant...oh bien après...brusque illumination...ça ne peut pas continuer ^durer...tout çw^a...tout ça...flot continu...la lutte pour saisir...en tirer quelque chose...et ses propres pensées...en tirer quelque chose...tout ça en - ...quoi?...le bourdon?...oui...tout le temps le bourdon...soi-disant...tout ça ensemble...imaginez!...tout le corps comme en allé...

Pas moi Segment 23, version 19 (MS-BnF-4-COL-178-970, f. 04r)

puis se disant...oh bien après...brusque illumination...ça ne peut pas continuer ^durer ...tout çw^a...tout ça...flot continu...la lutte pour saisir...en tirer quelque chose...et ses propres pensées...en tirer quelque chose...tout ça en - ...quoi?...le bourdon?...oui...tout le temps le bourdon...soi-disant...tout ça ensemble...imaginez!...tout le corps comme en allé...

Pas moi Segment 23, version 20 (Minuit 12, p. 6)

[BOUCHE:] puis se disant... oh bien après... brusque illumination... ça ne peut pas durer... tout ça... tout ça... flot continu... la lutte pour saisir... en tirer quelque chose... et ses propres pensées... en tirer quelque chose... tout ça en - ... quoi ?... le bourdon ?... oui... tout le temps le bourdon... soi-disant... tout ça ensemble... imaginez !... tout le corps comme en allé...

Pas moi Segment 23, version 21 (Minuit 1975, p. 16)

[BOUCHE:] puis se disant... oh bien après... brusque illumination... ça ne peut pas durer... tout ça... tout ça... flot continu... la lutte pour saisir... en tirer quelque chose... et ses propres pensées... en tirer quelque chose... tout ça en - ... quoi ?... le bourdon ?... oui... tout le temps le bourdon... soi-disant... tout ça ensemble... imaginez !... tout le corps comme en allé...