Synoptic Sentence View: Sentence 8

Not I Segment 8, version 1 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-1, f. 01r)

without feeling as it were of any kind and if not exactly insentient ... insentient for she ^I could still hear the buzzing in her ^my ears ... so loosely [⁁]^so called ... and a ray of light came and went ... came and went ... beam of the moon ^{such as the moon sheds} drifting ... in & out of cloud ... but so reduced ... sensation ... sensation so reduced that she ^{no notion} did not know what position she was in ... whether standing ... or sitting ... but the mind ... what? ... lying? lying? ... ? ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or lying ...

Not I Segment 8, version 2 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-1, f. 02r)

and if not exactly ... insentient ... insentient ... for she still heard ... the ^old buzzing in her so called! ... in her er ears ... and a ray of light ... came & went ... came & went ... such as the moon might shed ... drifting ... in & out of clouds ... but so lessened ... sensation ... sensation so lessened ... she did not know ... what position she was in ... whether standing ... or sitting ... but the brain ... what? ... lying? ... yes ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or lying ...

Not I Segment 8, version 3 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-2, f. 01r)

and if not exactly...insentient...insentient...for w^she still ^could heard the buzzing...so-called!...in the ears...and a ray of light...such as the moon might shed...drifteing...in and out of cloud...but so lessened...sensation...sensation so lessened...she did not know...what position she s^was in...whether standing...ot^r sitting...but the brain 6.. brain -...what?...lying?...whx^ether standing...or sitting...or lying...

Not I Segment 8, version 4 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-3, f. 01r)

and if not exactly...insentient...insentient...for she still could hear the buzzing...so-called!...in the ears...and a ray of light...such as the moon might cast...drifting...in and out of cloud light...came and went...came and went...such as the moon might cast...drifting...in and out of cloud...but lessened ^dulled...sensation ^feeling...sensation ^feeling so lessened ^dulled...she did not know...what position she was in!...^{imagine...what position she was in!...}whether standing...or sitting...but the brain - ...what?...lying?^...yes...whether standing...or sitting...or lying...

Not I Segment 8, version 5 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-4, f. 01r)

and if not exactly...insentient...insentient...no...for she could still hear the buzzing...so-called!...in the ears...and a ray of light...came and went...came and went...such as the moon might cast...drifting...in and out of cloud...but dulled...feeling...feeling so dulled...she did not know...what oi^position she was in...imagine!...what position she was in!...whether standing...or sitting...but the brain - ...what?...lying?...yes...wha^ether standing...or sitting...or lying...

Not I Segment 8, version 6 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-5, f. 01r)

and if not exactly..insentient..insentient..for she could still hear the buzzing..so-called!..in the ears..and a ray of light..came and went..came and went..such as the moon might cast..drifti;ⁿg..in and out of cloud..but dulled..feeling..feeling so dulled..she did not know..what position she was in..imagine!..what position she was in!..whether standing..or sitting..but the brain - ..what?..kneeling?..yes..whether standing..or sitting..or kneeling..but the brain - ..what?..lying?..yes..whather standing..or sitting..or kneeling..or lying..

Not I Segment 8, version 7 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-6, f. 01r)

and if not exactly ^actually..insentient..insentient..for she could still hear the buzzing..so-called!..in the ears..and a ray of light came and went..came and went..such as the moon might cast..drifting..in and out of cloud..bur^t dulled..feeling..feeling so dulled..she did not know..what position she was in..imagine!..what position she was in!..whether standing..ot^r sitting..but the brain -..what? ..kneeling?..yes..whether standing..or sitting..or kneeling..but the brain - ..what? ..lying?..yes..whether standing..or sitting..or kneeling..or lying..

Not I Segment 8, loose jotting 8 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-6, f. 06v)

came & went - came & went

Not I Segment 8, version 9 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-7, f. 01r)

and if not actually insentient..insentient..for she could still hear the buzzing..so-called..in the ears..and a ray of light came and went..came and went...^such as the moon might cast..drifting..in and out of cloud..but so dulled ^numbed..feeling..feeling so dulled ^numbed..she did not know..what position she was in!..imagine!.. what position she was in!..whether standing..or sitting..but the brain - ^p ..what?..kneeling?..yes..whether standing..or sitting..or kneeling..but the brain - ^p ..what?..lying?..yes..whether standing..or sitting..or kneeling..or lying..

Not I Segment 8, version 10 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-8, f. 01r)

and if not exactly ^...insentient...insentient...for she could still hear the buzzing...so-called!...in the ears...and a ray of light came and went...came and went...such as the moon might cast...drifting...in and out of cloud...but so dulled...feeling...feeling so dulled...she did not know...what position she was in!...imagine!...what position she was in!... whether standing...or sitting...but the brain-what?..kneeling?...yes...whether standing ...or sitting...or kneeling...but the brain.^-..what?...lying?...yes...whether standing...or sitting...or kneeling...or lying...

Not I Segment 8, loose jotting 11 (MS-UoR-1227-7-12-10-synopsis, f. 01r)

No feeling apart from buzzing in her head and awareness
of a ray of light

Not I Segment 8, version 12 (MS-HRC-SB-5-4, f. 04r)

and if not exactly ... insentient ... insentient ... for she could still hear the buzzing ... so-called! ... in the ears ... and a ray of light came and went ... came and went ... such as the moon might cast ... drifting ... in and out of cloud ... but so dulled ... feeling ... feeling so dulled ... she did not know ... what position she was in! ... imagine! ... what position she was in! .. whether standing ... or sitting ... but the brain - what? ... kneeling? ... yes ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or kneeling ... but the brain - ... what? ... lying? ... yes ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or kneeling ... or lying

Not I Segment 8, version 13 (MS-HRC-SB-5-3, f. 03r)

and if not exactly ... insentient ... insentient ... for she could still hear the buzzing ... so-called!^[₰] ... in the ears ... and a ray of light came and went ... came and went ... such as the moon might cast ... drifting ... in and out of cloud ... but so dulled ... feeling ... feeling so dulled ... she did not know ... what position she was in!^[₰] ... imagine! ... what position she was in!^{! .}.. whether standing ... or sitting ... but the brain - ^... what? ... kneeling? ... yes ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or kneeling ... but the brain - ... what? ... lying? ... yes ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or kneeling ... or lying

Not I Segment 8, version 14 (Faber & Faber 1973, p. 7)

[MOUTH:] and if not exactly ... insentient ... insentient ... for she could still hear the buzzing ... so-called ... in the ears ... and a ray of light came and went ... came and went ... such as the moon might cast ... drifting ... in and out of cloud ... but so dulled ... feeling ... feeling so dulled ... she did not know ... what position she was in ... imagine! ... what position she was in! ... whether standing ... or sitting ... but the brain - ... what? ... kneeling? ... yes ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or kneeling ... but the brain - ... what? ... lying? ... yes ... whether standing ... or sitting ... or kneeling ... or lying ...

Pas moi Segment 8, version 15 (MS-UoR-1396-4-25, f. 01r)

^{elle se trouv}..et sinon exactement privée de sentiment..non..car elle entendait encore..le bourdonnement dans l'oreille..et un rayon de lumière allait et venait.. allait et venait..comme xxx souvent la lune en jette..on aurait dit de la lune..à cache-cache parmi les nuages..

Pas moi Segment 8, version 16 (MS-UoR-1396-4-25, f. 01r)

et sinon exactement privée de sentiment..non..car elle l'entendait encore..le bourdonnement ^bourdon..soi-disant..dans l'oreille ^{les oreilles}..et un rayon ^rai de lumière allait et venait..allait et venait..on aurait dit de la lune..à cache-cache parmi les nuages..mais si engourdi..le corps..le corps si engourdi..à ne pas savoir..comment il se tenait..si c'était debout..ou assis..mais le cerveau - ..quoi?..à genoux?..oui..si debout..ou assis..ou à genoux..

Pas moi Segment 8, version 17 (MS-UoR-1396-4-26, f. 01r)

et sinon exactement...privée de sentiment...non...car elle l'entend toujours...le bourdon soi-disant...dans les oreilles...et un rai de lumière...^rayon va et vient...va et vient... on aurait dit la ^{comme tel[→] un rayon de} lune...à cache-cache dans les nuages...mais si engourdi...le corps...le corps si engourdi...à ne pas savoir...comment il se tient...xxx imaginez!...comment il se tient!...si c'est debout...ou assis...mais le cerveau - ...quoi?...couché? ^{à genoux?}...oui...si debout...ou assis...ou couché ou à genoux...

Pas moi Segment 8, version 18 (MS-UoR-1396-4-27, f. 02r)

et sinon exactement...privée de sentiment...non...car elle entend toujours le bourdon...soi-duⁱsant...dans les ^l'oreilles...et un rayon va et vient...va et vient...tel un rayon de lune...à cache-cache dans les nuages...mais si engourdi...le corps...le corps si engourdi...à ne pas savoir comment il se tient...imaginez!...comment il se tient!...s'il estd ^si debout...ou assis...mais le cerveau - ...quoi?...à genoux?...oui...si debout...ou assis... ou à genoux...

Pas moi Segment 8, version 19 (MS-BnF-4-COL-344-27, f. 03r)

et sinon exactement...privée de sentiment...non...car elle entend toujours le bourdon...soi-diasant ...dans l'oreille...et un rayon va et vient...va et vient...tel un rayon de lune...à cache-cache dans les nuages...mais si engourdi...le corps...le corps si engourdi...à ne pas savoir comment il se tient...imaginez!...comment il se tient!...si debout...ou assis...mais le cerveau - ...quoi?...couché?...^hgfogf..^vc.ccccccccc mais le cerveau - ...quoi?...à genoux?...oui...si debout...ou assis...ou à genoux...

Pas moi Segment 8, version 20 (Minuit 12, p. 3)

[BOUCHE:] et sinon exactement... privée de sentiment... non... car elle entend toujours le bourdon... soi-disant... dans l'oreille... et un rayon va et vient... va et vient... tel un rayon de lune... à cache-cache dans les nuages... mais si engourdi... le corps... le corps si engourdi... à ne pas savoir comment il se tient... imaginez !... comment il se tient !... si debout... ou assis... mais le cerveau - quoi ? ... à genoux ?... oui... si debout... ou assis... ou à genoux...

Pas moi Segment 8, version 21 (Minuit 1975, p. 9)

[BOUCHE:] et sinon exactement... privée de sentiment... non... car elle entend toujours le bourdon... soi-disant... dans l'oreille... et un rayon va et vient... va et vient... tel un rayon de lune... à cache-cache dans les nuages... mais si engourdi... le corps... le corps si engourdi... à ne pas savoir comment il se tient... imaginez !... comment il se tient !... si debout... ou assis... mais le cerveau - quoi ? ... à genoux ?... oui... si debout... ou assis... ou à genoux...