Synoptic Sentence View: Sentence 45

That Time Segment 45, version 1 (MS-UoR-1477-1, f. 08r)

or alone in the same places ^scenes wherever ^whatever they might be talking xx making it up that way to keep going keep it going alone on the edge of the stone for example with the wheat and sky or ^{stock still} on the towpath with the ghosts of the towmules watching the dead ^drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset watching it out of sight and standing or then stock still nothing moving only the water and the sun going down till it went down & you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 2 (MS-UoR-1477-2, f. 04r)

or ^{in the same} alone in the same scenes whatever they might be making it up that way to keep going keep it going keep it out alone on the edge of the stone for example with the wheat and azure or stock still on the towpath with the ghosts of the towmules watching the drowned rat or bird whatever it was floating off into the sunset till it was out of sight stock still nothing moving only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 3 (MS-UoR-1477-3, f. 06r)

or alone -^- or alone in the same the same scenes alone wherever they might be making it up that way to keep going keep it going keep it out on the stone for example alone at^on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or stock still on the towpath with the ghosts of the twomules tow mules watching the drowned rat or bird or whx^atever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more stock still nothing moving only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished overlap ^{when was that} [0045|001] ^Silence. [0045|002] ^{10 seconds.} [0045|003] [⁁] ^{Faint sound of breathing.} [0045|004] ^{After 3 seconds eyes open}

That Time Segment 45, version 4 (MS-UoR-1477-4, f. 02r)

or alone in the same the same scenes alone wherever they might be making it up that way to keep going keep it going keep it out on the stone for example alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or or stock still on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules watching the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more stock still nothing moving only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 5 (MS-UoR-1477-5, f. 04r)

or alone in the same the same scenes alone wherever they might be making it up that way to keep going keep it going keep it out on the stone for example alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and the blue or on the towpath st

That Time Segment 45, version 6 (MS-UoR-1477-5, f. 05r)

or alone in the same the same scenes alone wherever it might be making it up that ^way[⁁] to keep going keep it going keep it out on the stone for example alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules watching the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more nothing moving only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 7 (MS-UoR-1477-6, f. 06r)

or alone in the same the same scenes making it up that way to keep going keep it going keep it out on the stone for example alone on the end of the stone with the wheat a and blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules watching the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more nothing stirring only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 8 (MS-UoR-1477-10, f. 03r)

or alone in the same the same scenes making it up that way to keep going keep it going keep it out on the stone alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more nothing stirring only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, loose jotting 9 (MS-UoR-1639, f. 02r)

^{25 B9 or alone .. all vanished}

That Time Segment 45, version 10 (MS-UoR-1477-9, f. 03r)

or alone in the same the same scenes making it up that way to keep going keep it going keep it out on the stone alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more nothing stirring only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 11 (MS-UoR-1477-7, f. 04r)

or alone in the same the same scenes making it up that way to keep going keep it goinx^g keep it out on the stone ^{(eyes close)} alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more nothing stirring only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 12 (MS-UoR-1477-8, f. 05r)

or alone in the same the same scenes making it up that way to keep it going keep it out on the stone (eyes close) alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till yous you could see it no more nothing stirring only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 13 (MS-BC-1991001-13-4, f. 06r)

or alone in the same the same scenes making it up that way to keep it going keep it out on the stone (eyes close) alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more nothing stirring only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

That Time Segment 45, version 14 (Faber & Faber 1976, p. 14)

[B:] or alone in the same the same scenes making it up that way to keep it going keep it out on the stone (eyes close) alone on the end of the stone with the wheat and blue or the towpath alone on the towpath with the ghosts of the mules the drowned rat or bird or whatever it was floating off into the sunset till you could see it no more nothing stirring only the water and the sun going down till it went down and you vanished all vanished

Cette fois Segment 45, version 15 (MS-UoR-1657-1, f. 05r)

ou seul dans les mêmes les mêmes scènes l'inventant ainsi histoire de faire durer te garer du vide sur la pierre (yeux se ferment) seul sur ^au bout de la pierre les blés l'azur ou le halage seul sur le halage avec les mules fantômes le rat et le rat noyé ou l'oiseau bestiole quelconque xxi emporté peu à px peu dans xx soleil couchan les feux du couchant hors de ta vue et rien qui bouge sinon l'eau et le soleil qui se couche jusqu'à ce qu'il se couche et que toi tu disparaisse que tout disparaisse

Cette fois Segment 45, version 16 (MS-UoR-1657-2, f. 05r)

ou seul dans les mêmes les mêmes scènes l'inventant ainsi ^{l'inventant ici ainsi (cf C. 7)} pour histoire de faire durer ^tenir contenir le vide sur la pierre (^les yeux se ferment^{, légère baisse de l'éclairage}) seul au bout de la pierre les blés l'azur ou le halage seul sur le halage avec les mules fantômes et le rat cr noyé ou l' ^{peut-être un} oiseau bestiole quelconque emporte peu à peu ^{s'en allant au fil de l'eau s'en allant} dans les feux du couchant ^lentement hors de ta vue et rien qui bouge sinon l'eau et le soleil qui se couche ^{meurt se mourant} jusqu'à ce qu'il se couche et que toi tu disparaisse ^{toi disparu avec} que toyt tout disparaisse ^{meure disparaisse et toi avec tout avec}

Cette fois Segment 45, version 17 (MS-UoR-1657-3, f. 06r)

ou seuls dans les mêmes ^{les mêmes} scènes l'inventant ainsi histoire de tenir contenir le vide sur la pierre (les yeux se ferment, légère baisse de l'éclairage) seul au bout de la pierre ^avec les blés l'azur ou le halage seul sur le halage avec les mules fantômes et le rat noyé à moins d'être un ^{ou l'}oiseau ^{qui sait} bestiole quelconque au fil de l'eau s'en allant dans les feux du couchant lentement hors de ta vue rien qui bouge sinon l'eau et le soleil se mourant jusqu'à ce qu'il meure disparaisse et toi avec tout avec

Cette fois Segment 45, version 18 (MS-UoR-3628, f. 16r)

ou seul dans les mêmes scènes l'inventant ainsi histoire de tenir contenir le vide sur la pierre (les yeux se ferment, légère baisse de l'éclairage) seul au bout de la pierre avec les blés l'azur ou le halage seul sur le halage avec les mules fantômes et le rat noyé ou l'oiseau qui sait bestiole quelconque au fil de l'eau s'en allant dans les feux du couchant lentement hors de ta vue rien qui bouge sinon l'eau et le soleil se mourant jusqu'à ce qu'il meure disparaisse et toi avec tout avec

Cette fois Segment 45, version 19 (Minuit 1978, p. 19)

[B:] ou seul dans les mêmes scènes l'inventant ainsi histoire de tenir contenir le vide sur la pierre (les yeux se ferment, légère baisse de l'éclairage) seul au bout de la pierre avec les blés l'azur ou le halage seul sur le halage avec les mules fantômes et le rat noyé ou l'oiseau qui sait bestiole quelconque au fil de l'eau s'en allant dans les feux du couchant lentement hors de ta vue rien qui bouge sinon l'eau et le soleil se mourant jusqu'à ce qu'il meure disparaisse et toi avec tout avec